Bound by Their Own Imaginations: What We Lose When We Stop Writing

I was at the beach with a notebook and a pen when a man came over and asked if I was a writer.

I told him no. I was jotting down random thoughts as they arrived, which is what I actually do, and what I have done for as long as I can remember. He turned out to be a former Department of Education teacher and a creative writer himself, and we stood there talking the way strangers sometimes do when the ocean is loud enough to make small talk unnecessary. At some point I said the thing I have been saying to myself for years, which is that I wish I had the discipline. I bought Stephen King's On Writing more than fifteen years ago. I have still not finished it.

And then he told me something about his students that I have thought about every day since.

He said his students were often bound by their own imaginations.

Bound by them. Held inside them. Able to see the entire thing in full color and unable to get it out onto the page. And the getting it out is the hard part, and the getting it out is also, precisely, the thinking.

I have been turning that sentence over ever since I read Dana Goldstein's reporting in The New York Times on what students lose when they stop writing, because her piece and his sentence are describing the same phenomenon from opposite ends, and almost nobody in this debate is holding both.

The difficulty is not a design flaw. It is the mechanism.

Goldstein opens with the cognitive psychologist Ronald T. Kellogg, who spent years studying how human beings write and concluded that drafting a basic persuasive essay is roughly as mentally taxing as digging a ditch is physically exhausting. That is a research finding, not a complaint. Writing requires command of vocabulary, spelling, and grammar. It forces comprehension of a subject, retrieval from working memory, organization, and planning. It is so demanding that a person in the middle of it can barely do anything else, which anybody who has shushed a family member mid-sentence already knows in their body.

Dr. Kellogg put it another way that I have not been able to shake. Writing, he said, is a technology for thinking.

That framing reorganizes everything. It means writing is not primarily a delivery mechanism for thoughts you already have. It is the apparatus by which the thoughts get formed. The linguist Naomi S. Baron traces in her work how American education shifted from oral examination to written composition in the late nineteenth century as the economy changed and class sizes grew, and how teachers discovered along the way that writing itself deepened knowledge. Cognitive research since has confirmed that writing helps us retain what we read, forces us to stress-test our own claims against counterargument, and turns revision into a practice of self-critique.

So when somewhere between two thirds and ninety percent of high school and college students are now using these tools for schoolwork, and frequently for writing specifically, the question is not whether the essays will still get produced. They will. The question is what happens to the apparatus.

There is early evidence, and it is not comforting. A study out of the Massachusetts Institute of Technology found that people writing in partnership with chatbots showed lower brain activity while writing, struggled afterward to recall what they had actually written, and felt little ownership over the result. That finding sits inside a growing body of research suggesting that frequent use of these systems can erode critical thinking.

The word that gave the game away.

Teachers are responding by returning to pen and paper, blue books, and proctored essays composed in the room. Technology executives find this baffling, and describe rejection of these tools as a kind of educational malpractice, pointing out that writing is already the leading workplace use of the technology.

One general manager at a company selling writing software described educators who withhold these tools as effectively announcing to their students, whom she referred to as consumers, that their coursework is irrelevant to the job market.

I want to stop on that word, because it is not a slip. It is a disclosure.

A student is not a consumer of their own education. A student is a person in the middle of building the cognitive apparatus they will use for the rest of their life. The distinction is not sentimental. It determines who the school is accountable to, what the product is optimized for, and whose interests get weighted when the two conflict. When the vocabulary of the marketplace enters the classroom, the classroom's obligations quietly change shape, and nobody has to vote on it.

And now the part that keeps getting flattened.

I am not going to let this conversation become a straightforward defense of struggle, because that defense, made carelessly, runs directly over people I care about.

Steve Graham, a writing expert and educational psychologist at Arizona State University, notes that this technology can be especially useful for people with disabilities and for people writing in a language that is not their first. Voice to text has advanced enormously for writers who cannot easily type or write by hand. Grammar correction and clarity suggestions are real assistance. And there is something quieter in there that matters as much as any of it, which is that the help arrives privately. You can get feedback on a rough draft without handing your rough draft to another person and watching their face change. For the large share of American students who find writing painful and embarrassing, that privacy is not a convenience. It is the difference between attempting the assignment and avoiding it.

For neurodivergent writers, this can be load-bearing in a way that people outside that experience consistently underestimate. If your mind generates faster than your hands can organize, if the barrier is the executive function required to sequence a paragraph rather than any shortage of ideas, then a tool that helps you get the thought out of the cage is not a shortcut around thinking. It is access to thinking that was already happening and had nowhere to go.

That is what the teacher on the beach was describing. Bound by their own imaginations. Not empty. Full, and stuck.

And I hold that beside the other thing Dr. Graham says, which is that no part of the writing process can be handed over without some cost, because intellectual growth occurs at every stage from brainstorming through final revision. If writing is thinking, then whatever portion of the struggle gets outsourced represents some portion of perception surrendered.

Both of these are true. That is not a contradiction to be resolved by picking a side. It is a design problem, and design problems have answers.

Somebody has to draw the lanes, and that somebody matters more than the lanes.

There are workable models already in the world.

The University of Sydney operates what it calls a two-lane approach. Across every discipline, professors must administer some assessments in person under secure conditions where use of these tools is limited, and must also allow the tools on other assessments, so students can demonstrate that they know how to apply them. A group of writing experts convened at the University of California, Irvine and recommended that schools resist reducing the time devoted to writing, and that writing be embedded across the whole curriculum, not because the workplace demands it but because it sharpens the mind. Anna Mills, a writing instructor at the College of Marin, has built specific prompts students can use to get useful feedback without handing over the work itself.

Notice what those answers have in common. Every one of them was designed by an educator, with the classroom's obligations rather than a product roadmap as the starting point. The two-lane approach did not require permission from any vendor. It required an institution that understood the authority was already its own.

And that is the whole issue, because in most places the lanes are not being drawn that way. They are being drawn by companies building Socratic modes and study modes that, as Goldstein documents from her own testing, will decline to write your essay and then produce hundreds of polished, structured words the moment you ask for an example of what the paragraphs might look like. The distinction between guiding and doing turns out to be a phrasing away.

Students and teachers live every consequence of these systems. They hold no standing anywhere in the design of them. Their available responses are adoption or refusal, which is not a governance model. It is a menu.

What the missing infrastructure would actually do.

I am not calling for a ban and I am not calling for enthusiasm. I am calling for the thing that is absent underneath both positions.

Educators, students, and disability advocates need reserved authority over how these tools enter a classroom. They need their documented experience of what helps and what harms to be admitted as evidence, weighted against vendor claims rather than subordinate to them. And somebody accountable to them needs the actual power to halt a deployment that is not working, rather than the power to write a strongly worded assessment of it afterward.

Without that, districts will keep oscillating between prohibition and adoption depending on which pressure is loudest in a given season, and the people in the classroom will keep absorbing the whiplash. With it, you get a two-lane policy, or something better, built by the people who know what the lanes are for.

The technology is not the variable that decides how this goes. Authority is.

The junior said it better than the adults.

There is a high school junior quoted in Goldstein's reporting who said she was thrilled by what a chatbot could do for data analysis in a science research class, and clear-eyed about the risk of using one to write about literature, because you do not strengthen the muscle if you never analyze the hard text. The hard texts, she said, are meant to be hard.

She is holding both things at once, without strain, which is more than most of the executives quoted in that piece managed.

The man at the beach was right too. People are bound by their own imaginations, and some of them need help getting out, and some of them need the struggle precisely because the struggle is the thing.

Both. At the same time. And the only question that determines whether we get this right is who holds the authority to decide which is which, and for whom, and when.

I am going to go finish the Stephen King…one day.

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